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Trying to be Somebody

T hough tears almost dry,
R adiance alters to cry,
Y ield's only dropping by,
I nsanity teases with shy,
N ightmare deprives calmness,
G naws conscience leaves mindless,

T ime shows the tamer of horses, Hector,
O r Achilles, the greatest Greek warrior.
B eing remembered for the brave behavior.  
E xemplary figures that never fade forever. 

S uccess doesn't come freely,
O bstacles will stop your odyssey,
M ourning star covers how far you see,
E nemies' envy will kill you slowly.
B ut always be the best you can be,
O ptimistic and think positively,
D o not surrender your dignity,
Y ou’ll soon be somebody.
                                                                                                                            
                                            Malang, 11 March 2012
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12 comments:

  1. Nice poem,,,walau kesannya agak mikir...but btw, how to make a good poem sir?

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    1. Thanks
      every person has its own opinion ok :)
      good or not is not our domain to think, the point here is just make the literary work as good as u can and then let the rest to the reader to enjoy and judge.

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  2. Great work
    I like it
    Terus berkarya bro

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  3. klu menurutku sih buat puisi tu gampang2 susah banyak faktor yang mempengaruhi untuk menghasilkan inspirasi, pas sedih, seneng, kecewa, dll. intinya tergantung mood kita.
    Puisinya asyik sir. :)

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  4. dengan membaca kita mengenal dunia
    dengan tulisan kita dikenal oleh dunia

    zaman sekarang yang kita butuhkan emang suri tauladan yang baik...tu yg mnrutQ surah sangat langka

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    1. bagus sekali kata2nya

      u're right, that's the only thing that our people needs

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  5. Bisa bantu analisa chariot by Emily Dickinson ga???

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    1. coba deh ikuti link ini:

      http://awinlanguage.blogspot.com/2012/02/lives-like-loaded-guns-emily-dickinson.html

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  6. Ini inspirasinya dari film Troy ya Sir?

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  7. Jadi ingat lagunya Goerge Groban, 'Remember'

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